NIGHT MARE MOON

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NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Facade » 22 Oct 2011 20:06

http://soundcloud.com/petfood56/the-night-will-last-forever-v3
inspired by night mare moon ^.^
edit: title of song is the night will last forever
its finished now :P
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Facade » 22 Oct 2011 20:54

deleted it because something was wrong i will fix it later right now i sleep
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Stars In Autumn » 22 Oct 2011 22:07

For future reference, post your original pony songs here: viewforum.php?f=17. This forum is used for MIDI and stem requests/posts.
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Makkon » 22 Oct 2011 23:10

No worries, I'll move it (:

And I'll be honest. The layout we have is confusing. Working on that.
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Facade » 23 Oct 2011 07:52

Makkon wrote:No worries, I'll move it (:

And I'll be honest. The layout we have is confusing. Working on that.

ya it seemed like i should post it here but i guess not :S

also i "fixed it"

http://soundcloud.com/petfood56/the-night-will-last-forever-v3
v3 because v1 had no trebble and v2 was broken
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby bartekko » 24 Oct 2011 13:14

It's so trancy.... but not in the meaning you think of: trance was in its first days very repetitive, repetitive, repetitive, repetitive, repetitive...

and the cymbal is a bit too loud, plain unfitting in some places. (anyone have a good collection of crashes? I'm having the same problem.)

also, the volume acts in some moments, strange. did you overcompress it? or were you just playing with the volume

the main loop is repetitive, but catchy enough, the drums are fair enough...

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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Facade » 24 Oct 2011 15:35

bartekko wrote:It's so trancy.... but not in the meaning you think of: trance was in its first days very repetitive, repetitive, repetitive, repetitive, repetitive...

and the cymbal is a bit too loud, plain unfitting in some places. (anyone have a good collection of crashes? I'm having the same problem.)

also, the volume acts in some moments, strange. did you overcompress it? or were you just playing with the volume

the main loop is repetitive, but catchy enough, the drums are fair enough...

thanks most of the problems where because i couldn't see a thing when i made it (stupid laptop)
as for cymbals i didn't have my good ones with me and for volume over compression most likely since i dont know much about compressors :P
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby bartekko » 24 Oct 2011 15:47

Can you not quote the whole thing for the future references? :3

you can just quote, and instead of the whole post, you can just write "words"


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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Facade » 24 Oct 2011 15:51

bartekko wrote:Can you not quote the whole thing for the future references? :3

ok i'll try
edit: opps
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Stars In Autumn » 24 Oct 2011 23:21

petfood56 wrote:
bartekko wrote:Can you not quote the whole thing for the future references? :3

ok i'll try
edit: opps

This made me laugh.

As far as the song, I'd say the drums need a bit of work. Like bartekko said, the crash is a bit odd. I'd add a bit more punch to the kick too. Otherwise I like it. Nice use of the NMM samples and the melody is pretty nice.
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Facade » 25 Oct 2011 05:37

Jeffthestrider wrote:As far as the song, I'd say the drums need a bit of work. Like bartekko said, the crash is a bit odd. I'd add a bit more punch to the kick too. Otherwise I like it. Nice use of the NMM samples and the melody is pretty nice.

thanks ^.^ i really need better drum samples though :P
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Interrobang Pie » 25 Oct 2011 15:11

petfood56 wrote:drum samples

Here.
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Re: NIGHT MARE MOON

Postby Facade » 25 Oct 2011 15:50

Interrobang Pie wrote:
petfood56 wrote:drum samples

Here.

i have those already thanks any way though
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