Stargazer (Sparkle)

[PiercingSight]

Here ya go...


"Dad are you space?" "Yes. Now we are a family again."

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If only I was an astronaut...

(if you don't understand the image, I'm sorry but not even I can help you)

I had zero plan for this song. I recorded the entire thing in one go, and only removed 2 bad note hits and fixed 1 timing issue.

I have a window above my keyboard and I decided to open it up. Outside I saw a light gray sky. It was showering delicately onto the tall pines swaying in the wind. My eyes were looking out at this sight for half the time I was writing this song... I think I found a new method

I tried to come up with a way to add vocals or strings but they all seemed too... full... too rich... so I wrote only a piano part, thus having the same twinkling beauty of space.

Made in Garageband '11 using the standard instruments and these soundfonts:
http://the-filmmusic-group.deviantart.c ... /35177859/

Mp3 download: http://www.mediafire.com/file/9rpq54alh ... parkle.mp3

Image download: http://danegraphics.com/Images/Stargazer.jpg

[Makkon]

This was pretty tranquil, man. Considering that this was all improv, it really had a nice flow to it. There are a few things about the composition that felt a tad weak and predictable, but that's to be expected considering. I think this would really sound nice with some supporting instruments in places. I like the effects that you had for the piano, the ethereal reverb gave for a very light feel.

Most of all, I appreciate you wanting to keep MLR a creative environment and that you're willing to share your work, even though you haven't been getting near as much feedback as you deserve. Just keep at it, man.

[PiercingSight]

This was pretty tranquil, man. Considering that this was all improv, it really had a nice flow to it. There are a few things about the composition that felt a tad weak and predictable, but that's to be expected considering. I think this would really sound nice with some supporting instruments in places. I like the effects that you had for the piano, the ethereal reverb gave for a very light feel.

Most of all, I appreciate you wanting to keep MLR a creative environment and that you're willing to share your work, even though you haven't been getting near as much feedback as you deserve. Just keep at it, man.

No prob. As I said in the description I tried to add supporting instruments but they would have been too much for what I wanted to write ... Just an artistic choice.

Anyway, right now i'm thinking I might add another channel to Youtube so I can try different styles like DnB and Dub, but I'm going to challenge traditional versions of those styles by trying to make you feel a STRONG emotion through it... I feel like it'll be challenging but also totally worth it.

So basically, I want to write a DnB or Dub that can bring tears (and not because it's horrendous )

But I'm not done writing classically, no way. So yeah, thanks for appreciating my stuff. It's good motivation

[Versilaryan]

I liked it. You did a good job capturing a feeling of grandeur. =)