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I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby UnderpΩny » 03 Oct 2011 12:41

A horrible prototype-version of a song I've been working on. The vocals will be double-tracked. And I know the drums are awful right now. I'm officially seeking proffessional help!

http://soundcloud.com/underg-d/lunasong-concept/s-gKgMz
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Re: I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby Makkon » 03 Oct 2011 13:06

That was actually pretty awesome.

Professional help?
http://www.nmha.org/

But I do agree the drum sounds, not the patterns, need to be worked out a bit. So far I'm really enjoying this though.
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Re: I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby UnderpΩny » 03 Oct 2011 13:24

I think there are too many ideas and none of them are developed enough. I just can't decide what to send to the moon.
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Re: I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby Facade » 03 Oct 2011 16:10

everypony wants to write a song about luna it seems (almost everyone at least)
i should probably stop mine and do something different :P
BTW: awesome song btw love the lyrics ^.^
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby UnderpΩny » 03 Oct 2011 16:53

I... decided to make a Luna song because "everybody's doing it" XD
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Re: I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby Facade » 03 Oct 2011 16:56

UnderpΩny wrote:I... decided to make a Luna song because "everybody's doing it" XD

haha XD
did you write the lyrics or did somepony else?
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Re: I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby UnderpΩny » 03 Oct 2011 17:24

I wrote them... I know I'm not the worlds best lyricist (is that a word?) but I think I did OK.
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Re: I apologize for this clearly broken song.

Postby Facade » 03 Oct 2011 18:44

UnderpΩny wrote:I wrote them... I know I'm not the worlds best lyricist (is that a word?) but I think I did OK.

you did better then i could this is all that i got :/

Every pony slept through her night
so she made it night forever
and was banished to the moon
for a thousand long years-
the stars helped her get back
and tried again
but all will be good again
with the help of the 6 pony friends
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