Evil Ehchantress House remix WIP

[SeanNH94]

http://soundcloud.com/seannh94/evil-enchgantress-remix-wip
Still a wip. I'm liking how it's going but I wanted to get some input on it.

[Facade]

love house love this cant wait for the finished version ^.^

[SeanNH94]

Thanks bro. It probably won't be too much longer.

[Facade]

your welcome ^.^

[Lethaargic]

Those vocals sound awesome and the bass is getting nice and dirty. The build up back into the bass at 2.07 is kind of awkward, try and put some more energy behind that transition.

[SeanNH94]

Thanks for the advice Spacepsy! ;D
I didn't really notice that until you pointed it out.

[Facade]

one thing i cant understand the lyrics at all idk why maybe too much flanger? is that the word?

[NoiZyBroNy]

I'm really loving this remix. Nice job, bro. *Brohoof*

I don't have any real complaints, but i do kind of agree with petfood56
about the intelligibility of the evil enchantress vocals. You could
probably mess around with the EQ a bit so that the consonants
are a little more pronounced, but other than that, it's great.

I really hope you keep up the good work!
Can't wait for the final cut!

[Versilaryan]

The entire thing sounds like it's building up to a HUGE, dense chorus. That said, it's fine if it doesn't (though purely IMO, it would be awesome if it did), but it means you have to find another way to make the music go somewhere. All music should be leading to somewhere or from somewhere, and the grand majority of all songs are leading to somewhere. If you don't really include any sort of emotional variance, it sounds stale.
(That's what choruses are for in rock -- the verses and prechorus lead up to the emotional high in the chorus before leading away from the chorus and dropping back down again. That's why so many songs end with a last restatement of the chorus -- that way, the whole song builds up to that at the end and you end the song feeling satisfied.)

I also agree with Spacepsy. That buildup there does feel awkward. I think you should keep that bassline there, but more subdued. Maybe use a filter?