Hopefull Village - DasDeer

[DasDeer]

A song i did around two weeks ago.
I haven't received any real feedback from it, just things like "it sounds good", or "I like the flute".
I'd appreciate any feedback from you guys!

[Freewave]

had to turn it up a little, reminds me of ocean blue a little at the beginning (jangle poppy). the parts without the synth backing a bit bare. the midi instruments while still good are a little transparent. overall its good but just a tad bland as it may just need a little bit more layering or hooks. the overall elements are good. hope this helps.

[DasDeer]

This did help, thank you!

You did mention quite a couple of good points. I'll have in your feedback in my head as i create new stuff.
Again, thanks!