by Thunder Dash » 07 Sep 2015 19:46
Watch your tracks and your inhales. They interfere with the song quite a bit. Add a little low end to your beatbox/percussion vocals. They sound like they're a bit shallow and have quite a bit of high end. Also, watch your basslines, they're wobbly. Keep them on steady "ah"s. Also, your rhythmic/melodic middle vocal just seems flat. You might want to have a tuner near you do that way you can make sure you're always in tune. That's perhaps the biggest thing you're facing on this track.