<pony><future house> Winter Wrapup/Bats! Remix

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<pony><future house> Winter Wrapup/Bats! Remix

Postby NightmareRare » 12 Jun 2015 00:21

Well I guess it my turn to offer a track :) This is one I wrote a while back using a style and genre I hadn't tried before, I feel its a little of the "genre expectaion mark" but still, I feel the result was quite nice.

Lettr rip guys dont hold back :)

https://soundcloud.com/nightmarerare/winter-bat
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Re: <pony><future house> Winter Wrapup/Bats! Remix

Postby NightmareRare » 02 Jul 2015 08:32

Just gonna take the silence to mean no notes for me ^_^
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Re: <pony><future house> Winter Wrapup/Bats! Remix

Postby Jupiter Pony » 02 Jul 2015 19:49

Haha well, I gave it a listen. There were a couple things that stood out to me as being off.

1. At the 37 second mark how it went into that repeating bat fade thing while also being the first time using the full "stop the bats" phrase. I was expecting more of it to continue before transiting into something else and it felt kind of jarring.

2. The "spring is here" sample at 2:37 sounds off to me, I think it needs to be stretched a tiny bit to last longer or something to fit in nicer with the music behind it.

Overall a nice tune.
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Re: <pony><future house> Winter Wrapup/Bats! Remix

Postby NightmareRare » 02 Jul 2015 20:49

Thanks for the note man! I thought the vocal was off too, you pointing it out confirms it :P
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