<Original><Rap><Pony> FL Brony- Before the Bombs [Prod Oxul]

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<Original><Rap><Pony> FL Brony- Before the Bombs [Prod Oxul]

Postby Fl Brony » 03 Feb 2015 05:29

Newest song I made based on my favorite fanfic Fallout: Equestria, I also had to reupload it because when I rendered the file I left my second verse muted.
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Postby Kawaii » 03 Feb 2015 14:03

It's good but rather short. You should bring up the drums a bit more so that it cuts through but that's a personal opinion.
The xylophone type synth is a bit weird, it gives it too childish of a vibe (again imo) maybe drop it an octave or two?
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Postby Fl Brony » 03 Feb 2015 14:20

Kawaii wrote:It's good but rather short. You should bring up the drums a bit more so that it cuts through but that's a personal opinion.
The xylophone type synth is a bit weird, it gives it too childish of a vibe (again imo) maybe drop it an octave or two?

I would but I didn't make the instrumental, I just wrote the verses
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Postby NightmareRare » 06 Mar 2015 20:30

Nice. Could be a min or two longer but great job I like your rap style
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Postby DatWhackProducer » 13 Mar 2015 14:54

is been a year and a half n rap beats havent change #smh #srsly
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