<pony><Neuro> Tirek by Kawaii <WIP>

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<pony><Neuro> Tirek by Kawaii <WIP>

Postby Kawaii » 30 Jan 2015 22:25

https://soundcloud.com/kawaiireallife/tirek-preview

I did this in a few hours, i've still got to mixdown and edit the bassline, bounce to audio and split it and edit it again, EQ it and add stereo imaging. Mono the sub still. Anyway enjoy! This is my first song under Kawaii and it is also my first track as a neuro artist.
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Re: <pony><Neuro> Tirek by Kawaii <WIP>

Postby eery » 30 Jan 2015 22:56

Pretty dope bass, feel you could have done a bit more to it tho, for more of a neuro growly feel instead of just plain reese. The constant panning is pretty annoying, and the drums are lackluster and drowned out.

Good start for a project I suppose

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Re: <pony><Neuro> Tirek by Kawaii <WIP>

Postby Facade » 30 Jan 2015 23:08

the bass is pretty dope like eery said dont go so hard on the panning try at max 15-20%

like the beat it fits nicely though the kick and snare could use a little umf (compression maybe?)

im not too versed in nero but is it supposed to be just drums and bass after the drop?
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Re: <pony><Neuro> Tirek by Kawaii <WIP>

Postby Kawaii » 30 Jan 2015 23:13

The bass panning is in the synth not on the track. I'll fix it though, and yeah it seems to be mostly bass because the bass itself also pitches up into the leads, I can add some synths though. The drums are bad because it isn't mixed yet. I just threw it together and added an instance of Ozone and XL. Thanks for the feedback though, i'll definitely try to fix these problems.

Also: I actually liked the bass panning? I tend to do that to everything that isn't a mid/sub bass which is why I'm forcing mono to the low end in the synth and then exporting tow wave forms and editing those. Again, thanks guys!
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