<Pony><electro> Dive

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<Pony><electro> Dive

Postby Andi » 29 Jan 2015 15:12

[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AVML3-SR7g[/youtube]
Recently finished a collab with Giggly Maria. All sorts of feedback is appreciated ^^

EDIT: Fixed the link (still didn't fix it, man i can't get this to work) o.o
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Re: <Pony><electro> Dive

Postby Totalspark » 30 Jan 2015 14:48

the link doesnt work sir.
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Re: <Pony><electro> Dive

Postby Tiazn » 30 Jan 2015 17:49

Giggly Maria really has come a long way.

Still, her vocals could have been more energetic to fit with the harder, upbeat portions of the song, as well as overall louder.

The chorus sections seems to aim for that complextro feel, from what I hear. It may have been better if you trimmed the main melody chords a bit and gave the accompanying bass modulations and wobbles more prominence as well as dimension through some panning effects.

I love listening to the vocal splices and pitch-shifts from your other songs, possibly you might have a track with those kinds of stuff coming up?












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Re: <Pony><electro> Dive

Postby Facade » 30 Jan 2015 23:03

umm am i the only one that cant find the link anywhere?
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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DerpyGrooves wrote:The secret to a good song has everything to do with the relationship of the verse and the chorus to one another


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Re: <Pony><electro> Dive

Postby Scooblee » 31 Jan 2015 00:56

No, &I just mislinked. Here's a proper link:

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Re: <Pony><electro> Dive

Postby Andi » 31 Jan 2015 10:04

Thanks for the feedback
Tiazn wrote:I love listening to the vocal splices and pitch-shifts from your other songs, possibly you might have a track with those kinds of stuff coming up?

I love vocal chopping so there will be more of that in the future
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