by Thunder Dash » 14 Jan 2015 21:05
Great work! Love the overall feel to it and despite it having no drums, you kept that driving rhythm with your guitar! Nice going! However, I think you turned up your guitar a little too loud. I had to strain a bit to hear your voice. Turn down the guitar a little and turn up your vocal mic or sing a little louder.
You sounded great and each note came out nice and clear. However, the one thing I heard was that your voice was a bit whispy, as if you sort of singing like Fluttershy would. Be sure to have a tight stomach and proper posture so that way your voice can project, because it was a little hard to understand what you were saying plus the fact the guitar was loud.
As far as the melody, you had a nice progression there. Your variations were really well planned out.
For the sound of the guitar, it seemed a little too dry and a bit muffled too. Perhaps dial in a subtle chorus to give it a little depth and maybe cut back on some of the mid-range frequencies.
Overall, a really great song! Keep it up!