<Industrial>One Two Three Four

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<Industrial>One Two Three Four

Postby Injustrial » 26 Mar 2015 19:21

Decided to make a song about writer's block. Any thoughts on the mix? Is the bass too muddy, the kick too overpowering? Does the vocals come through?

https://soundcloud.com/injustrial/one-two-three-four/s-my9IC
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Re: <Industrial>One Two Three Four

Postby GhostXb » 26 Mar 2015 23:23

I find the vocals a bit indistinguishable at points. After my ears adjusted to it it sounded ok, but at first it was just noise. Other then that I find the bass and kick fairly balanced.
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Re: <Industrial>One Two Three Four

Postby Injustrial » 27 Mar 2015 08:59

Thanks for the reply. I've opened up the top end a bit, since it was a bit too lacking there and I think that also helped bring out the vocals more.
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Re: <Industrial>One Two Three Four

Postby Shad0wMeister » 27 Mar 2015 10:32

I agree with Ghost, the rest of the song sounds good but your vocals do get a bit indistinguishable. If you fix that it would sound good to my ears.
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Re: <Industrial>One Two Three Four

Postby NightmareRare » 02 Apr 2015 17:20

I like vocoder vocals, very metal, and the hook when the kids sung 1234. Good stuff man
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Re: <Industrial>One Two Three Four

Postby Injustrial » 02 Apr 2015 18:49

Finished, mastered, up on Youtube

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