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This Song Needs Lyrics

Postby Electric Velocity » 15 Feb 2014 16:20

I'm pretty much done mastering this song and I finally decided on a structure, so the last thing it needs is lyrics. I left space for them and I was hoping someone could listen to it and give me some ideas. I suck at writing lyrics. If anyone can tell me what comes to mind when they listen, then I can work towards getting a singer or just using a vocoder myself.

Here's the song: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/sx3 ... 20Time.wav

I named it "Take Your Time" and was thinking of lyrics that are about someone deciding if they want to be with another person, but it's taking a long time. The other person is fine with that as long as the other is happy. That's about as far as I got with the subject. It can be pony or not, I just want it to have soul. I pasted in "The music Sounds Better With You", and the vocals actually sounded good with it. This genre is usually more associated with love. I just don't have enough on my mind to write about it.

Thanks for reading.
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Re: This Song Needs Lyrics

Postby Injustrial » 15 Feb 2014 21:56

I'm very tired right now, but I heard what you've got and could possibly help out a bit. At least get you started.

Could you let me know when you want the verses to begin (and end?)
Do you want a bridge? A lead-in to the chorus? A whatnot?
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Re: This Song Needs Lyrics

Postby Electric Velocity » 16 Feb 2014 10:04

I'm not sure if this structure will work or if the measures are too long.

0:33 - 1:05, Chorus 1

1:05 - 1:39, Verse 1

1:39 - 2:12, Chorus 2

2:45 - 3:18, Verse 2

3:18 - 4:24, Chorus 3 repeat twice

4:24 - End, Outro

Tell me if that will be a problem.
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Re: This Song Needs Lyrics

Postby Electric Velocity » 16 Feb 2014 10:32

I want something that you could imagine Daft Punk singing if that helps.
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Re: This Song Needs Lyrics

Postby Injustrial » 17 Feb 2014 17:07

Gimme a bit of time and I'll see what I come up with. If I don't reply in a very long time, I've probably forgotten about it and you should remind me
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Re: This Song Needs Lyrics

Postby Electric Velocity » 18 Feb 2014 15:24

Alright. You can add me on skype at electricvelocity. That way I can give you more input along the way.
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Re: This Song Needs Lyrics

Postby Ponytheorist » 18 Jul 2014 09:13

Do you still need lyrics? (I'm happy to help :)
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