Looking for some feedback

[Kryptage]

So I've been working on a new piece. It's nice, returning to my roots in trance, and I'm really liking the track. Aside from small things that are easy fixes, I feel like there is something missing in the track, that I just can't figure out what.

Maybe I'm just being overly critical, but I want to be sure, so if anyone who reads this wouldn't mind, could you give the track a listen, and give me any critical feedback you can think of.

Heres the link: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/47575731/Weather%20Control.mp3

Any feed back is greatly appreciated.

[Sugarholik]

Got nothing except that it sounds nice

But I'm afraid this should belong here:
viewforum.php?f=9
That's the place for requesting critique on songs.

[Kryptage]

Got nothing except that it sounds nice

But I'm afraid this should belong here:
http://www.mylittleremix.com/viewforum.php?f=9
That's the place for requesting critique on songs.

I had a bad feeling I would be posting in the wrong place. I just knew this was a thread for "help" I guess I just assumed this would be considered help...well Thanks! I think I'll go repost there.