This was my second ever composition made in a DAW (Logic Express 7) in September 2011, and since then I have milked it to death with new sections, instruments and various plugins, but I just can't get it to sound how I want it to. Its just too dark for me, despite the bright EQ on some synths, and particularly in the chorus does not deliver the uprising feeling that I expect from it. The sound design leaves quite a bit to be desired (apart from maybe 4:23 to 4:38). I've arranged it so that there's room for vocals to be put in later. Even though I should probably move on I want to get this out there at some stage, 'cause it just seems like a waste to not to. I've intended it to be a Dashie piece for the last month or so.
Here's a Dropbox link